Reasonably well-written, although there are a few grammar errors (missing commas; there should be no spaces before ?s). Very short, but evocative in its own way. I’d play a longer version that spends more time setting the scene and developing the characters.
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Reasonably well-written, although there are a few grammar errors (missing commas; there should be no spaces before ?s). Very short, but evocative in its own way. I’d play a longer version that spends more time setting the scene and developing the characters.
Hi, thanks for the message ! I'll fix some problems and change the ending today !